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Pvtcreek

  • Member since April 18, 2007.
  • I am a 18 year old person
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  • on The Sadness In Death by stars girl, on April 18, 2007
    yeah i agree that the sadness is with you for as long as you live but the pain doesn't have to be so overwhelming that we would put a stop to our lives pemanently. i'm still working on a the death of my lala(grandpa) from 7 years ago. and it is hard but i've learned to cope with his departure from this world!!

  • on Shed Blood by stars girl, on April 18, 2007
    i like it but it doesn't seem to end. i can relate to you once again but for most of us the end doesn't come...in a way causing us more pain due to the consequences of our previous actions