XXBrutalRomanceXx at Share Poetry

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hey ppl. im tired right now, so i'll add info later.

Last seen on Sep 16 1:24 AM 2008. Member since August 31, 2008.
My mood is , and quote is "whatever".
I am a 14 year old girl from Missouri (United States)
When I'm not writing, I'm singing, talking, listening to music,drawing obsessing over MCR...
I have 3 comments, 1 archived poem

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Comfort Cutting Time at allpoetry
The cold blade startles my flesh as it strokes my fingertips.
here i am at allpoetry
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1. AP name: xXBrutalRomanceXx
Love Buddy? me? i hope! at allpoetry
THIS IS NOT A POEM!!! fyi.

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on Dust Kisses. by gnosisonG, on September 1, 2008
wow. this is a pretty good poem on that topic. you did a great job on this piece. the speaker aounds sorrowful in the loss of love and years. i lov the raw emotion in it. my favorite part was the last stanza.

there were so many dry phrases! i am thirsty just from reading it, as i devoured each and every moistureless line. great job!
on Loverdose. by gnosisonG, on September 1, 2008
wow. im really not so sure what to say. ive never been in the position of commenting on a really really good love/ overdose poem. well all i can say is 5 stars! you get a 21 out of 10. good work.