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Hello everybody My name is Andy, I am a freestyle writter, I have been doing this for longer than I thought, writting is  an art form that I love, sets me free into a world that I create. I will read yours and comment, so I hope that you will do the same...  

 

            so keep writting...

  • Last seen 1 day ago. Member since November 24, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is "tired and hungry".
  • I am a 27 year old man from Florida (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a nuclear officer in miami ,fl.
  • I support the site as a gold member
  • I am in the groups All Hail Free Verse
  • I have 9 comments

Poems I'm focused on

  • / Watchful eyes sleeping, through the whirlwinds my thoughts echoed back to the starting conclusion that brought them to begin with. I sen
    190 words, 1 comment, November 27, 2008. In Dark, Free verse, Thoughts, Personal

My Poetry

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  • How is it done, how do you just move on. / Years all forgotten and gone. I want to stop loving you / But this love is just too strong. I heard in a song / That all things change, that nothing last for ever / Not
    157 words, December 3, 2008
  • I think I must be sleeping, somebody come and wake me.... This is my life, my goals and my dreams, all balled up in to one big maze that I can’t find an exit to. I'm in a double edge sword fight with a ghostly figure in the dark... / / I have answers
    157 words, December 3, 2008. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Free verse
  • I was woken up this mourning at 5:45, by what some might call a nightmare, but I call a dream. These past few months I have been in a state of mind other than my own. It's as if my thoughts have evolved into a shadowed silhouette with ba
    145 words, December 3, 2008
  • ( Confused ) That's what comes to mind when I think of you. You left me under the impression that you had moved on. On the operating table, all dressed up and very careful you ripped my heart from my chest. My love for you was layed down to rest. /
    307 words, December 3, 2008. In Anger, Sad, Thoughts

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  • ACpoetry : Hi there on December 8, 2008
    Hey Andy, and welcome to the club, where you will be held captive and never let free. Muhahaha. Seriously though, this place is addicting, so watch yourself. I'm going to read some of yours right now. I am a particularly big fan of freestyle, so I'll try not to have bias.

    Regards and welcome,

    - A.C.
  • Brian Balzer : Hello Randomthoughts on November 24, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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  • on Untitled by billbrando, on December 17, 2008
    Hello Bill, how are this is andy from randomthoughts. I like this becouse is very personnal to me,I sometimes have mixed feelings about how people worships to an extreme, this paintings and crafts, i personally thing that sort of feeling should be within us, not some painting.... I suggest that if you feel like it's unfinished then go back becouse it is, when ever I feel like that its becouse it is....  good work, and thank you for your time

  • on Them by randomthoughts, on December 12, 2008

    this is for you

    I feel like this is what our writtings would some time tell us if they could speak to us, kind of out there, but thats us, we all are a little out there righr?