My Favorite Things:
-finding the exact perfect word to match your thought
-running until I think I couldn't possibly make another stride, and then taking 10 more
-doing everything on fire
-playing dress up
-learning someone said something nice about me behind my back
-eating my words
-ugliness
-the smell of clean sheets
-swapping addictions
- Last seen on Nov 29 6:27 PM. Member since November 2, 2006.
- I am a 22 year old girl from Florida (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm one classy bitch.
- I have 162 comments, 2 archived poems
My Poetry
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of the MP3 you made me entitled “Rapes For Sale,”
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on untitled by , on July 30
almost musical
This has a great rhythm to it. It reads like a stop motion jack hammer which is not something I've encountered in a poem. And the final line is really unexpected and well fitting. I'm not sure why I liked this one so much. It has that indefinable quality that can't be quantified. Good write.
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very honest
I really like the open-heartedness (made up word alert) of this poem. I don't think you should mess with it too much because I think it might take away it's freshness, if that makes sense. I especially liked the ending. It was not expected and eased the train into the station. Sorry I'm talking nonsense. Haha. But I really liked this one.