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Rbruce

  • Last seen on Sep 29 4:28 AM 2008. Member since December 15, 2007.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Content".
  • I am a 75 year old person (Australia)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm doing another of my hobbies.
  • I have 6 comments, 1 archived poem

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  • The Rabbit Trapper at storywrite
    It was the time of the rabbit plague and green grass was nowhere to be seen. Even dry tough old weeds were scarce. Those damn rabbits in their thousands had eaten everything that was not poisonous to them except the Prickly P
  • Murphy's Law at allpoetry
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  • I'm Gunna Tell On You at allpoetry
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  • on Fall to Grace by Dun, on March 6, 2008
    Very good. Written as if you were speaking to me personally. I notice that the speed fo the poem varies with the tone of its content at that point. I like that. You have also used plain language from start to finish, I like that too. To sum up, an excellent poem.

  • on The Message by riveralex, on February 19, 2008
    We all do it, cast a bottle into the ocean. Not actually, but in our lives we make choices based on faith, mostly they work out in the end. A very enjoyable read, thank you.