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So he became very physically fit / went to the gym five times a week / his muscles rippled / throughout his strong body / his butt cheeks w234 words, 3 comments, December 1
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The sun was in my eyes / so I formed a shade / with my left hand / touching my forehead / in a limp saluting pose / like the rim of a ba132 words, 8 comments, November 30
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If I was words / on a piece of paper / I would propose to your poetry / I`d be a paper plane / and fly you to all / your favorite places /97 words, 8 comments, November 28
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185 words, 2 comments, November 27. In Adult
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Brian Balzer : Hello Rhetorica on October 30I stopped by to say hello and give you a much deserved read. I'm sorry I haven't been by in while. I've just gotten busy, especially here lately. I've beseeched by several poets to help with revisions, which of course is an honor and a privilege but it takes time and takes its toll. It seems the days I spend working on my short stories are the days when I'm flooded comments. Then I must try to catch up on replys and returning comments. I worry that some have slipped through the cracks and I have neglected to return the favor on some. I shall endeavor to do my best and hope that it is good enough.
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rhetorica : Rhetorica on October 27I think the whole purpose of being a writer is to make things up but make them seem like they really happened which is what you can do...bye
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dave ochs : hey rhetorica on October 15anybody that quotes Bukowski is all right with me. keep living and writing. May the gods be good with you.
Dave
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on The Key To A Girl by cee, 1 day agovery original poem except in real this is not funny,sometimes it doesn`t matter what a man says or does,if the woman in his life wants an argument then he`s getting one
but this isn`t real life,its a poem and an extremely humorous one
well done
it made me laugh/cry




There is another quote from Churchill i like,an MP by the name of Nancy Astor was particularly ill-disposed towards him one day,she said Winston if i was married to you i`d put poison in your coffee and Churchill replied,Nancy,if you were my wife i`d drink it!!
See you around Dun
bye