- Last seen on Dec 28 5:06 PM 2008. Member since July 13, 2008.
- My mood is , and quote is "content, but with things on my mind.".
- I am a 22 year old girl (United Kingdom)
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My Poetry
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Sound asleep amongst the stars, / playing in a world full of rainbows and toy cars, / / I hope you laugh out loud each day, / and enjoy yourself in every possible way, / / Although my arms will never hold you, / my love is real, and foreve78 words, 2 comments, August 11, 2008. In Thoughts
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Every single day i think of you, do u think of me? / I miss u a little bit more every single day, do u miss me? / I thought with time it would get easier, but the pain just grows, / A feelin within me that no one can know, / / You have moved o
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leanne.m on September 11, 2008haha dont worry im not so good at the poetry terms either lol but i do english lit at school so.. yes a stanza just means a verse in the poem - nothing too scary! thx for the feedback! leanne xoxo
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skipeople : welcome to SP! on July 13, 2008Glad to chat, help, or be ignored! Which ever may flip your pancakes.
Ashley =]
Comments
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on No by marcusmoore, on August 11, 2008i loved this, i was kind of mezmorised by it, it was like reading a story, very natuaral im not really up on poetry terms or lingo but it just seemed to flow, and i love the way you use short sentances even just the one word on some occasions, its blunt but in the way you need it to be , all in all a fab piece, xxxxxxxxx thankyou very much for you opinion on my poem, i love getting feedback xxx
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on A Bottle's Tail by mojojames, on July 13, 2008
i like the way its so natural, i enjoyed reading this xx
