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In the realm of my mind,
Ran innumerable words into an voracious vent…
Crammed with candid cues clinging astray…
Good Heavens!! I found this very sublime ship on the way..
In this ship named Sharepoetry were sailors across nations
Dropping in and sharing thoughts of their fascination
I embarked..
I surrendered to groove into the impulsive rhythmic words of my mind shrine
I see nothing more truthful impetuous and divine…

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  • I am a 28 year old person (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm thinking what to write.
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    / A tall, old strong physique / With an ever cool cheerful moral fiber / She was forgiving than the God / She was giving than the Lord /
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  • on Satan's the Antagonist by Grace O Malley, on October 3

    Truly monumental

    Reading the title at once I actually thought you should have been inspired by John Milton's "Paradise Lost"..Now after rereading the lines I feel like I am reading a perfect bold romantic who seem to be constantly mending her heart and mind in Love..I loved the figures of speech you used in the poem right from the inspiring lines in the begining until the terrifying torrents of temperature... beautifully compiled and thoughtfully traced..very artistic..

    Cheers
    RhythmDivine

  • on Say GoodBye by marcusmoore, on September 24

    Inciting needles indeed

    You seem to have the way with words..I liked the phrase "needles of sunbeams"..very raw and potent yet poetic..thats such a beautiful combination..Very inciting start that makes the reader snoop in the lines further..Me being the lover of nature myself feel so helpless at the sight of cutting down trees..When there are people tremendously following the regime of planting trees everywhere, there are on the otherside chopping it off thats so pathetic..Guess one needs to proactively plunge in and take the lead and then hope for the rest to follow..I liked every line of your poem except for the title..Be it me, I would have said "never say good bye" to nature, authoritative though Thanks for sharing and keep writing, its inspiring

    . Rewarded 8