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Shanee.miller

  • Member since September 23, 2009.
  • I am a 32 year old person
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  • on My true love by Nakooma, on February 3
    This touched a nerve, a sweet nerve! I call my man this - my one and only! I did wonder about the splits in "with out" and but it fit the the cadance of being so lost With OUT him! Nice one! I intend to share it with my love, MY one and only!
    Regards, Shanee
    P.S. You might want to correct the punctuation in line 4, to he's or he IS!

  • on The ONE MORE SIP OF CROWN poem by algoressister, on February 3

    Hot and Sexy

    Yeah like it a lot!! So hot and sexy, but could have done without the 'chunks' at the beginning and the end!