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Sombersplender

  • Last seen on Sep 28 11:03 AM 2006. Member since May 30, 2006.
  • I am a girl from New York (United States)
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  • on I'm not you by Keaton Banks, on September 20, 2006

    hahahaha

    Omg that was funny.  You have to notice some talent in those whores of our generation though.  Honestly I think the diamond sashed, crotch grabbing stars of today are a lot more talented and real than the girly, sing a long boy bands that took over our nation about 10 years ago---now that was awful. I guess the prediction for the future is that the world will be sweeped by a wave of electronica and rap, so be ready.  There still are kickass bands that get stoned and care immensly-like tool, so dont lose all hope.  there will always be people like you, and to an extent me, who see passed the pathetic fazes that control our lives.  

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  • on Not Real Love by Bo Dukes Cowgirl, on September 20, 2006

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    This sounds a lot more like a journal entry than a poem.  I dont feel the rhythm or language.  but yeah i love the subject.  I used to be mad about actors, I love Nat Portman right now...haha celeb love of course!!  I used to get critisized about how I got "obsessed" (i hate that word) with movies ( I would fall in love with subject more than movies, like pirates, or mayhem, or revolutionist, or in middle school bands).  People have differant interrest and you can find something to pick out of that person just as well, they should just mind there own business.  I like this though, it reminded me a lot of my past.