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Sparefolk

I'm a 19 year old student who wants do write something that means something to someone, even if it just moves one person, I would be happy.
I live in Leicester and London and go to DeMontfort University in Leicester. I wish I could write a list of insperations, but I can't, I never was much of a reader so my work is basically just the scratchings from the inside of my head. The meaningless sound of my thoughts. I hope you enjoy what I have to say anyway x

  • Last seen on Oct 18 6:53 AM. Member since September 3.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Tired".
  • I am a 19 year old man (United Kingdom)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Media Production student and DeMontfort University.
  • I have 2 comments

My Poetry

  • The Things We Don't See Coming
    Things have changed from the way they used to be. / It would have been wrong to think that they would stay the same / You have gone down a path that they will not follow. / But who could have expected for things to be this different / And when you
    69 words, September 3
  • At Home
    The walls are closing in with mind crushing emptiness / / The floors don't swallow me like I wished they did, / / and the tv buzzes stati
    59 words, 1 comment, September 3. In Time, Life, Angst

My other items

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  • Easter Sunday in an Atheist House at storywrite
    Have you noticed that people only say "I don't care what people think" when they think someone is saying something bad about them. You don't get the situation where a person says to another "Hey, I've heard people saying that
  • Afternoon Haze at storywrite
    For some odd reason , after an early afternoon joint or two at Chris’ I had come home and in two conversations with Hannah and Eliot on MSN I had split into two characters, and old sailor to Eliot and a Film Noir type detecti
  • Student Rubbish at storywrite
    It was that night that I first witness of one of Chloe and Chris’s legendary “fights”. To this day I never knew what started it, mainly because me and Katie we packing up the game of Life that we had playing whilst me, Stuart

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  • on night clubbing by dirty clean poet, on September 9
    I really like this poem, the rhyming pattern really makes the structure flow well. Personally, I don't think it needs a second stanzaa, as the abruptness (?) works well with the subject matter

  • on On the Edge of Death Depressed by marcusmoore, on September 4
    This poem screams of brutal honesty and I can see that every word was very carefully chosen to get your message across