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  • on Fall by sparky66, on November 2, 2008
    Fall is my favorite time of the year..I love sitting in my chair, looking out my window, watching the leaves change to eventually a dry, bare, branch..

  • wonderful flow

    what came out in this poem was such deep thoughts and the feelings that went with it, I felt I was right there
    at the time of this beautiful sunset..keep writing..

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.