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  • Your Cult. by LifeIsIronic
    it is showing the darkenss of light!
    your hypocritical ways are jaded

    i wish not to swallow your word

    so upon me you spit your hatred

    to me your words are seldom heard



    you force
    suggested by madhu
  • A Fruity Poem by Brian Balzer
    This poem is witty and fun, sure to make anyone smile.
    When I gave a banana,
    to a girl named Savanah,
    I thought it would be cute,
    to try rhyming with fruit.
    I started with lime,
    which was easy to rhyme.
    To rhyme with peach,
    wasn't much of a reach.
    I rhymed with a mango,
    while doing the tango.
    To rhyme with honey dew,
    was easy to do.
    I rhymed with a cantaloupe,
    as fast as an antelope.
    While rhyming with plumb,
    I chewed on my thumb.
    Rhyming with grape,
    was sticky as tape.
    To rhyme with apple,
    I had to grapple.
    When I thought of strawberry then blueberry,
    things got hairy and a little bit scary.
    Then I thought of tangerine,
    and started feeling a little green
    suggested by Lake Absence
  • Accidental Worship by leanne.m
    The young lady who wrote this amazing poem is very insightful. I stand in awe of her vision. I know nothing of form and such but this peice not only envokes strong emotion but truly makes the reader ponder their views, and those of society in general. She has several great works but this one I believe to be truly incredible. Not only is the poem and it's content amazing but it was simply put "written out of boredom. I personally was more than impressed! BKB
    From those tiny gold pieces you keep in your pocket,
    To the big brash houses built in glass and chrome.
    People seem to think
    That within them exists a divine power.

    Omniscient, omnipotent.
    This existence, so they say,
    Is the answer to all our problems,
    It will feed the five thousand,
    Turn water into wine.

    It should be what we live for,
    Our lives of acedemia and work will lead to this
    Divine cause
    Being a part of our lives.

    It is, to believers,
    The summum bonum,
    The form of the good.

    The presence of such a thing can change
    The outlook of the beholder,
    Like a religious experience
    They will be a diff
    suggested by Brian Balzer
  • Accidental Worship by leanne.m
    I previously nominated a poem for the front page entitled Accidental Worship. I had been talking a lot to another poet just prior to reading it. I just realized that in my comments I had called her by the wrong name. I wanted to make sure I had submitted her name correctly when I nominated her. The poem which moved me so much was by leanne.m. Please consider this poem carefully. Thank you.
    From those tiny gold pieces you keep in your pocket,
    To the big brash houses built in glass and chrome.
    People seem to think
    That within them exists a divine power.

    Omniscient, omnipotent.
    This existence, so they say,
    Is the answer to all our problems,
    It will feed the five thousand,
    Turn water into wine.

    It should be what we live for,
    Our lives of acedemia and work will lead to this
    Divine cause
    Being a part of our lives.

    It is, to believers,
    The summum bonum,
    The form of the good.

    The presence of such a thing can change
    The outlook of the beholder,
    Like a religious experience
    They will be a diff
    suggested by Brian Balzer
  • China Earthquake by Windhover
    this poem is written from the perspective of a victim in China's recent earthquake. it is a must-read!

    My world caved in today
    Now all is darkness
    Only the radio, chirping away.
    How can they play
    music?
    Twelve thousand and counting they say
    It means nothing to me -
    and I'm one of them.

    My man and my child are here.
    I know they're dead -
    I can't see but I can feel
    I wish I couldn't

    Somewhere,
    a few yards
    and a thousand miles away
    there's a chink of light.
    It scourges me,
    keeps me hoping.

    Yesterday I had bills to pay,
    but I'd abandoned hope.
    Now I cling to its tiniest vestige
    like it was something
    real.

    What I'd give
    for the cares of yesterday


    suggested by Papyrus
  • China Earthquake by Windhover
    this poem is a wothwhile read because it reguards the recent disasters in China.

    My world caved in today
    Now all is darkness
    Only the radio, chirping away.
    How can they play
    music?
    Twelve thousand and counting they say
    It means nothing to me -
    and I'm one of them.

    My man and my child are here.
    I know they're dead -
    I can't see but I can feel
    I wish I couldn't

    Somewhere,
    a few yards
    and a thousand miles away
    there's a chink of light.
    It scourges me,
    keeps me hoping.

    Yesterday I had bills to pay,
    but I'd abandoned hope.
    Now I cling to its tiniest vestige
    like it was something
    real.

    What I'd give
    for the cares of yesterday


    suggested by Papyrus
  • Lament For Edie by marcusmoore
    I believe that this piece is exceptional and just a masterpiece in everyway of the word. Mixing forms throughout his work consistently, but always improving. I believe that he deserves to be acknowledged for progressing and writing something so beautiful for somebody he didn't even know.
    A damaged beauty so
    intriguing, she made
    a gay man question his
    sexuality.

    Made a folk-singer,
    song-writer call her
    a "Rolling Stone".
    The vanity.
    Every girl from Jersey,
    wants her cheek bones.

    A vulnerable strength
    blossomed from her eyes.
    Always apprehensive to,
    aspire to another's assessment
    about an appearance of herself.

    So fragile, bled to death
    from a papercut.
    Stuck inside of a
    parallel universe.
    Never knowing what
    is really what.

    Like when people tell her
    that everytime
    they see her,
    she has a different
    style or look.

    Is it good?
    Or bad?

    An un
    suggested by LeftTurnsOnly
  • If I were lying, I would have written nothing at all by ravenontheleft
    this is poem is like an amusement roller coaster ride that takes you through the haunted house, and fun house as the carousel music plays and crazy women laughs insanly.
    I am a steaming cup of urine
    a disembodied head
    a rat’s nest made of curly straws
    a velosa raptor
    with carrots for teeth
    a colostomy bag
    (only sometimes full of shit)
    like now

    I’ll eat your face for breakfast…
    really any meal of the day
    that also goes for the rest of you
    double for some parts
    I can put your ass in a Tupperware beside my bed
    or your eyeballs in the pickle juiced jar
    take a picture with my camera phone
    set it as your caller id

    you can wear the same jeans 8 times in a row
    I do it myself
    take 2 hours to do your hair
    keep your flat iron on all night
    for touch ups
    I’ll use it when I pret
    suggested by dave ochs
  • Questions by purple esprit
    New to our site, the poet is a European, still learning English. For that reason alone, her poem is amazing, but so is its mature heart. Please read. Lad
    Did I hear that certain song
    Leading me from days going wrong?
    When the melody sweetly sang
    Erasing my heart’s aching pang.

    Did I feel those soothing dreams
    Leaving light and warmth that gleams?
    A touch of love like a gentle breeze
    Giving my mind that needed ease.

    Did I see that reason for living
    A tender reply to what I’m giving?
    Dreams appeared like mysterious smoke
    Then faded early when I woke.

    Did I smell the promising rose
    Filling my inside with words of prose?
    Creating sweet desire of love
    Lifting me up to the light above.

    Did I let my emotions take hold
    Allowing what my heart has told?
    Of all t
    suggested by Lad
  • Quebec, My Muse, and Me by Terry-too
    An excellent example of poetic wonderment

    Note, very long: The story spans 60 years.

    The children are asleep,
    and I their mother, have been
    sorting files. Tossing tangled tales
    and putative poetry, pausing. . . .

    Here's a long one. "Cephalorphan Misfit."
    Orphan, cast away, abandoned reject?
    Foot-in-mouth, perhaps? Or secret?
    With no memory of the poem, I read on:

    "That time of week is here again." Yes,
    I write. "The whole week holds its breath
    awaiting this day; winds hold their blowing."

    Hmm, thought I. I remember,
    week-ends were the only time to write.
    Judging by the date, I taught.
    High-school French it was then.
    (Flipping pages.) This
    suggested by Barbara
  • Used Owned? by gnosisonG
    I read it 5 times over and was mesmerized. It is so in depth and deep and true and grounding. I cannot say enough about it, and I am just talking about the power it emits. It form is perfect.

    The hippy who lost happy
    Trudged through the gutter
    Below a cold turkey moon
    Morse-coding gibberish
    To the hot-wired brows
    Of a lunatic fringe.
    A husk of no-hoper
    Wearing naught but smoke-rings,
    Clutches at straws from scare-
    Crows blown off tack
    By ill-windfalls channelling
    Chemical currents...
    Swept to sea
    In a peagreen boat
    Afloat on aseed
    Waves of yesterday´s
    Flashback frescos
    And burnt-out Guernicas,
    Dazed trippers link
    Lungs with dopers –
    Resin-tarred from rising
    Damp of chillum stem.
    Hay Judes sow weeds,
    Flush cornucopias –
    And herbal tea aych seas.
    Slackening sails succumb
    T
    suggested by pemaquid
  • Dark Light by Windhover
    I dont need to give any reasons.Just read it and acht it and you ll see.
    Dark Light



    the rock, ocean and sky

    on which we fly through space

    drew its shadow like a slow shutter

    across the face of the shining moon



    and soon the last glinting

    of that familiar mystery

    no longer shone



    yet it was far



    from gone



    the rare phenomenon of a total lunar eclipse

    had not concealed our cosmic companion

    but revealed it

    sombre and strangely new in our night sky

    a living, solid object I could feel

    ominous and

    somehow

    real



    and in its halflight

    why
    suggested by Ludmila607
  • The Cradle Tree. by gnosisonG
    An amazing story that is expressed creatively. It was neat to read the change of pace while the man is in the midst of being hung. I had to re-read to fully appreciate the flow of the poem, but was happy to do s

    Dappled hues streaming
    Light as emerald sparkle
    Filtered through an insect eye
    A rustling symphony showers
    Sound widening an infant
    World smells of sap,
    Laden leaf and blossom.
    Touching rough bark
    Tasting the green air
    As his cradle tips to and fro
    Beneath a soothing canopy
     

    Later, on that endless Summer day
    A boy with frayed shorts and scuffed knees
    Climbing Jack’s beanstalk to discover
    A land richer than he dared imagine
    Sitting on the shoulder of a friendly giant
    Gazing at the undulating roll of field and forest
    And a vast majestic sky
     
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    suggested by chisox731
  • Horizon by Windhover
    This is one of the most lyrical contemporary erotic love poems ever seen anywhere, including those published by famous poets. Its masterful technique and purity of images are perfection. See for yourself.
    After the storm
    the world returned to her
    piecemeal
    and she heard her own cries
    like a visitor to the seaside hears gulls
    and thinks it alien

    Her breathing rasped
    like the swell of the water on shingle shore
    and the roar of her heartbeat -
    or was it his?-
    pulsed like breaking
    waves

    Weight pressed and soothed her
    like warm sand
    piled high by playing children
    their small and giddy cries
    fading, receding

    and her peace had depth
    of mighty ocean
    its mystery
    and its hue-
    she the deep blue sea
    and he
    her sky

    suggested by Lad
  • I stopped once by Kiddy
    This poem is wonderfully written, and everyone could relate to this poem so much! This poem gives people a little bit more relief, to see someone else pain and relate to the poem
    I stopped once
    startled for a moment
    lived a short life –
    just a gone glance!

    I walked for a mile
    ruminated a while
    doubted another life –
    one finer lesson.

    I asked ‘why’
    not even a reply
    intended with a new-
    oh! it’s just my view.

    I wanted more
    days, hardly a score
    were there to live -
    god! you didn’t give!

    I missed the treasure
    nothing can measure
    my grief at heart-
    everything fell apart!


    suggested by lilyqueen777
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