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Stani

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  • on Forever by optimista, on September 16
    nice write this, though i initially felt it may have ended up being too long-winded, but it aptly describes what you are feeling and when going through a phase like we are inclined to go on and on and on. yes, i can relate with this, sad memories it brings back. 'I want no one but you

    Your loss is killing me

    But wanting you after all you did is...pathetic

    Strong I am, but I'm up to my ears in this…

    Drowning uncontrollably…

    Yet fighting it for the sake of dignity

    I miss you, I love you, but I can't ever let you know

    Wipe my tears

    Paint on a smile

    Face the world like the whole person that I'm not….

    Not after you…

    You took a part of me with you

    Will I get it back?' i once felt like this! cheers!

  • on Kiss the Rain by mallam23, on September 16
    well! well! Well! i love this! what a build up. a wonderful description of sex and its climax. imagery is great, rhymes great and i am particularly in love with these 'Pulsating wet desires from within
    Begged for him to complete her sin
    Quivering over his warmth and tasting his skin
    Fixating her gaze as he dripped his rain down her chin' yes! sweet rain!