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  • on The Tongue Collector. by gnosisonG, on January 13

    speechless, nearly

    excellent, in a masochistic dark sort of way, very good

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 5, form: 4.

  • nope

    im sorry, but this just screams 'im an alcoholic in denial who sits around remembering the times i fucked my hardworking (or redneck) husband rough when i should be lookin for a job'

    language: 2, rhythm: 2, subject: 1, tone: 2, form: 3.