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  • rhetorica : Rhetorica on October 24, 2008
    I like your poems very much,hope you stay around here.
    Bye
  • Brian Balzer : Hello Subira, on October 14, 2008
    welcome to sharepoetry. I hope you enjoy your stay. Most of the folks here are pretty friendly. Feel free to holler if you have any questions. I'm always happy to help if I can. I'll try to read ya around sometime.
    BKB

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  • on Tree Birds by subira, on October 30, 2008

    thanks

    I think "brittle birds" is one of my fav parts of the poem too. I really like alliteration... sometimes. Thanks for reading, glad you had a fun time.

  • on Spitting Bones by subira, on October 30, 2008

    Thanks Lake!

    This was my first sonnet and I was trying super hard to avoid the whole "love sonnet" cliche, so glad I was able to do the job. Thanks so much for reading.

    Subira