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Talonix

  • Last seen on Nov 16 1:28 PM. Member since August 24.
  • My mood is , and quote is "null".
  • I am a 20 year old man from Michigan (United States)
  • I have 4 comments, 3 archived poems

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  • on Shape Shifter by mr backwards, on September 10

    wow

    I really enjoy EVERYTHING about this poem.

    "monster, like man
    But more fluid, less flesh
    Life of the unnecessary, albeit temporary
    An admission of guilt from these "demons""

    I love the use of none rhymes to make certain things stand out. Definitely going to read this one again. and again. No boring parts, the beginning grabs me and the rest is just so fluid you can't stop. Looking forward to your other works.

    . Rewarded 8

  • on Transcended Into Black by talonix, on September 5

    thanks man

    I have not listened to that song, but I appreciate the comment. You look so much like one of my friends its insane, I thought you were him at first haha.