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Thelord

hi i am the lord, i am lost, 18 years old, london ontario canada

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  • Theophilus on October 23, 2009
    well thank you sir. and i really sort of loved your summer poem. it was very vague and didnt tell you how to feel, it kinda let you figure out for yourself how to feel. i liked it.

    sort of sad. inevitable. but great.

    peace and love.
  • pizzamanoncrack : thanks on October 23, 2009
    Thank You for the the comment,i will try to fix that in the future

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  • on Darkness by pizzamanoncrack, on October 22, 2009
    one thing to think about, is try to shy away from telling the reader, what you see
    "when i wake up screaming"
    "when i close my eyes"

  • on Unconditional by Brian Balzer, on October 22, 2009
    really, really touching, theres so much integrity in your work i must say