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Thunderstorm

  • Last seen on Nov 24 5:22 PM. Member since August 25.
  • My mood is , and quote is "numb".
  • I am a 15 year old girl from Louisiana (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I have 4 comments, 3 archived poems

My Poetry

  • Thought out Nonsense
    Shapeless form / Soundless voice / Veiwless sight / And optionless choice / Spite filled glory / Love filled hate / A darkened sun / And a
    52 words, 3 comments, October 10
  • 10/2/08
    Unable to smell / Unwilling to see / But still longing for someone to call for me / To need my voice / And crave my touch / To want to be with me so much / That I would want / To stay and see / If there is a n
    45 words, 1 comment, October 2
  • Something With Nothing
    Scared and still bleeding / While I'm dead my heart's still beating / My eyes see but i am blind / My ears hear the familiar mystery / I fe
    66 words, October 2

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  • on In Sanity by iphios, on October 15
    for me personaly this made me go 'wow.. that sounds exactly like me in some parts'
    you can express this in ways that make people think about the words till they get the full meaning of them..
    the most meaningfull to me was when you said "They are
    fleeting creatures of the night, with pen stained fingers
    and sour love affairs painted ever so sweetly with their cherry red words."
    cause guess who was wrighting today with cherry red ink and has the proof on her hands... yeahh well thats all i got to say.
    great job!

  • on Thought out Nonsense by thunderstorm, on October 12

    thanks

    for the imput. i cant spell and spell check obviously dosnt help..
    but this is helpfull, cause it just reassurs what i was kinda getting the feeling of..