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Tirryb

  • Last seen on Sep 15 6:49 AM 2007. Member since July 2, 2006.
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  • Where we live
    Memories are all that's real, / Reality is forced to trade / and ever more from mind to fade, / leaving all there is to see / and touch within a memory / the flight of hand and heel. / All we gather soon is gone, / all w
    303 words, 2 comments, July 26, 2007. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Sad
  • Broken Mirror
    205 words, 3 comments, July 2, 2006

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  • on Where we live by tirryb, on July 28, 2007
    Hi Lad,

    thanks for this comment, I really appreciate your feedback. I'm really pleased you feel this shows confidence, primarily because I don't have much - I've only written a handful of poems in my life, I've never studied them and I profess to little understanding of their form - I just write what my heart tells me is 'right'.

    Thanks again, I appreciate it.