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Tirwander

  • Last seen on Nov 21 8:59 PM. Member since September 22.
  • My mood is , and quote is "content".
  • I am a 26 year old guy from North Carolina (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm working as a chef, going to school... sittin... :-P.
  • I support the site as a silver member
  • I have 38 comments

My Poetry

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  • Heart of love / Brings only one truth / God is real / / Without light / We wonder wildly / Without light / / Love is real / Fealt warm in all hearts / Show me love /
    31 words, 2 comments, November 5
  • Why does it hurt? / Why? / When I think / Of you? / / Not Mad, / Angry, / Just sad. / / Understanding / Why you left / Knowing / For th
    116 words, November 5
  • Why do you / Do what you do? / Why do you / Not care who / / You hurt? / / You buy / You spend / But in the / Very end / / / You never really worry / Who you break or / Who you snare. / / In your / / Trap
    130 words, 4 comments, November 5
  • Soft soothing, / Aroma and taste, / Warms my soul.
    8 words, 1 comment, November 3

My other items

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  • Untitled at storywrite
    Jonathan awoke this morning to an odd, peculiar sound. A sound that is hard for one to describe. Perhaps it resembled the low humming sound of someone vacuuming on the floor above you. That doesn't quite describe it though

Guest Book

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  • facethejam : hey on October 21
    hey i really like your work and it's a joy to read. i espcially like 'tired'. do you think you could take a look at a piece i've written and help me better it? it's called 'dear god'.
  • skipeople : Hey :) on October 3
    Thanks for the comments and welcome to SP. Can't wait to read your stuff and it's cool you're from NC too! Where exactly, I may know where it is?!

    Ashley
  • Miss O Malley : hello! on September 27
    Your work is wonderful! I look forward to reading more!
  • Brian Balzer : Hello tirwander, on September 22
    Welcome to share poetry. I look forward to reading your poetry. You have moved into a great community of poets. I would like to invite you to come to my home page and stroll through my Poetry Garden story which is like a philosophy. Then if you don't mind I would like you to sign my guest book at the bottom of the page. Thanks.
    Read ya now.
    BKB

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Comments

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  • Thanks

    Haha, those are the exact examples I give people for how my brain feels when I think about this stuff. Trying to imagine nothing... or infinite too... or the universe having no end maybe? how does that work? ah, ok, yeah that feeling is starting lol.

  • on Haiku Jujitsu by rhetorica, on November 6

    Oi!

    Ok, haha I assume you want no critique though i'd have none to offer. This just made me laugh. I love the picture hehe thanks for posting this! I'm going to be staring at the picture for an hour probably... trying to figure out how that happened... haha