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Triumph1204

  • Last seen on Jul 6 6:33 PM. Member since September 13, 2007.
  • I am a 56 year old person
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  • dave ochs : i thought this was a poetry site. on September 15, 2007
    it appears your too ashamed to post any poems maybe your afraid of criticism. We do know your a little guy from a small town in Scotland that puts ads in the university paper seeking other guys. How's chemistry going? I've seen your ad.
    dave

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  • on Death To The Infidels by dave ochs, on September 13, 2007

    dave ochs

    Shows how much you hate women that you would right away make sexually disparging remarks becuase your too inept to articulate your feelings. Your a mysogonist on top of everything else you write comments like you write poetry, its fingerpainted crap. If your head wasnt stuck so far up your ass youd see how pathetic your poetry is. A 5th grader could do better. As far as my husband leaving "my hole" for free "hole", shows what you must be like, and by the way straight men don't have husbands, but I guess you wouldn't know about straight men.

  • on Death To The Infidels by dave ochs, on September 13, 2007
    Stupid poem about cheating with cliched shallow insights, the comic book outlook on love, feel like I'm watching an infant defecate