- Last seen on Nov 23 1:06 AM 2008. Member since October 17, 2008.
- I am a 58 year old person (United States)
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two2scoops : I'm new here on October 17, 2008Hi, I'm new here so I'm just trying to figure out how to get around. Thank you for the comment on my poem. I've been reading some of the poems written and enjoyed them.
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Brian Balzer : Hello Two2scoops, on October 17, 2008Welcome to sharepoetry. I hope you enjoy your stay. You have moved into a small, yet growing, community of talanted poets. Most of the folks here are friendly enough for the most part. If you have any questions feel free to ask. I'm always happy to help if I can.
BKB
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on The Poo Poon by two2scoops, on November 5, 2008Thanks for the comment. I was just playing with words and rhymes when the Poo Poon was born. I have no idea what these creatures really are. I asked my grandchildren to draw pictures of what they think they should look like. Kids usually have a good imagination. There is no deep meaning to figure out, just the importance of having a bath, I guess. I enjoy reading it fast as kind of a tongue twister. You're right, the humor of it is a bit odd but I get a kick out of reading it. Thanks for the feedback. scoops
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I love this poem! "I hope I'm not too forward,followed by ...to make my words sincere." grabbed me and by the third stanza I already knew I would like this poem! Your work is smooth and I don't stumble and worry that I'm not getting it.
Also, people's personalities just intrigue me and hold me captive. Yes, I'm a people watcher.
Just a few of the lines that caught my ear: "Her words are never shy.", "Her poetry a visual shower:, Oh there are so many, I like the stanza - Courage... and NatureAngle...and that's not all. two2scoops
