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  • on The Vanishing Point. by gnosisonG, on April 23, 2007
    it's great......i think you did a great job with everything - the wording and the rest of it.....

  • on Cry Daddy, Please by blackheart38, on April 23, 2007
    It's ok......it could be a little better though.....i'm glad to know that you and your father worked things out and i wish you bboth well