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Xdisturbedxemotions

done with this site.

  • Last seen on Jun 15 4:06 PM. Member since August 4, 2007.
  • I am a 17 year old girl (United States)
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  • on untitled by , on November 1, 2007

    Thank you...

    Thank you.
    Im glad you liked it

    --Tori

  • on The Case For Pre-emption by dave ochs, on November 1, 2007

    Dave.

    ...This piece is great all around. I truly enjoyed reading it. Ive failed many times trying to grasp this subject or writing about it, but i beleive you truly did hit it right on the spot. I loved how as i was reading it, it provided images and i loved the description you used. everything fit in perfectly!!

    my favorite part was:

    like the kid in the candy store
    we can eat all the chocolate we want
    of course, everyone hates us
    and wants to acquire
    weapons of mass destruction
    to use on us

    i thought it was clever.

    Great Job!!

    --Tori

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